Sales page analysis.


Hey there,

Just dropping in on a Monday with a fine piece of conversion copywriting analysis.

(to help you write better sales copy)

See, even though I'm primarily an "email guy'...

Every now and then, I've gotta write a sales page.

I HATE EM.

They're long, tedious, and ya gotta be precise.

BUT you must know...

A sales page can make or break your product sales.

A good page makes writing emails easy because it does ALL the heavy lifting.

And that's why we're here today.

My friend Lessa did a HUGE breakdown of my sales page for The Creator's Welcome System.

I'm going to show you her breakdown in just a few seconds, but first, let's look at this page by the numbers.

During my December launch, this page saw:

  • 1,984 visits
  • 413 clicks to checkout
  • 134 sales

That's a 6.75% conversion rate.

Not "otherworldly" numbers, but anything over 6% is rock solid.

And since January, here are the numbers:

  • 4,343 visits
  • 465 clicks to checkout
  • 43 sales

That's right at 1% conversion on evergreen (autopilot).

A guy from Agora told me that any page that converts at 1% evergreen is plenty good enough.

So I'm going with that!

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ANYWAY...

Why am I showing you all this?

So you'll know that the page you're about to read an analysis of actually converts.

Because what's the point of studying something that doesn't actually work, eh?

Now that I've rambled enough...

Here's Lessa's breakdown of my sales page.

She went to great trouble for this, it's quite extensive.

And it was actually eye opening for me to read because there were things on the page I didn't even realize I'd done!

Because it's quite lengthy, she's broken it into two parts:

​Sales Page Analysis Part 1​

​Sales Page Analysis Part 2​

And if you've never seen the sales page for my Welcome System:

​>>> Here's a link to the sales page <<<​

Lmk what ya think.

Hope Lessa's brilliant (and crazy in-depth) break down of the page gives you a little a-ha moment today :)

Jeff

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P.S.

Go follow Lessa on X and join her email list.

Her content is a breath of fresh air amongst all the bros and platitudes. She's one of my favorite follows on the platform...AND she posts pictures of cows :)

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